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Che Burnett

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An almost classic tale of a ‘poor little rich girl’. Blanche Burnett or Che as she likes to be called, is a human/monster hybrid. But until some of the others in the stories her parents didn’t have a happy meeting.

Che is a child of rape. It was unknown how her father got a hold of a human woman, but he did and after many times his parents found out. Being wealthy business monsters they was not pleased that their only son was messing with a human, so they cut him out and cut him out of the will.

His whereabouts is unknown.

The human, Japanese Kuniko Yuko, they was going to return her back to the human world, They was going to return her to the human world but then they found out that she was pregnant so they hid her. In her isolation she sunk into a depression and two weeks after Che was born she suffocated herself with a plastic bag.

Che’s grandparents was glad she looked like a humanoid monster so they passed Che off as their own.

However they don’t love her just care for her and give her whatever Che wants out of guilt what their only son did.

Che is forever reminded of this yet she don’t let it bother her, she being fun, wild, loud and playful. In the inside she is slightly bitter, hiding her hate for what she is. She brushes it all off with a ‘I don’t care’ attitude. In the times, which is quite a bit, that she is left alone, that even at 17 going on 18, has picked up a habit of making ‘friends’ with the liqueur cabinet.

Che has a mix of her human and monster traits. Her father’s ears, tail, claws, feet and coloring. She got her humanoid shape from her mother as well as her eyes. As she has the full ‘showing’ breasts that isn’t hid with plates or fur or just nonexistent until she has young, she still has to wear some cloths covering her breasts. Her lower region however is monster and is hidden more.

She loves to shag cut her hair and dress and act trashy in rebelling against her ‘parents’, but is actually an act to get them to care and love her.


Blanche Burnett “Che” {c} Me
Image size
2544x6128px 2.36 MB
Make
Canon
Model
MP250 series
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(Sad to see how very little comments this received. :( ) I hope it's alright if I did the critique in this critique creator. It just helps me out a bit with evaluating. Also, Che's background in the description adds a lot to the overall judgment of how her design is supposed to look, so yes this really helps.

First off, her anatomy is fantastic. I can precisely tell she's part human and part monster before reading her character history. Her pose too is both sexy, intimidating (yes, you got it perfectly here! :clap:), and maybe even a bit vulnerable given the position of her arms compared to her dominating, wide stance (which tells us a lot about her). Her sly grin is equally sinister and also carries a bit of sex appeal, as if she's giving the viewer a ''come here'' suggestion. I don't think her grin would need to be wider; doing so may make her seem clownish and that may not be your intention so the size it is now is just fine because it's also uniquely feminine.

Her overall design is pretty decent from the colour choice to her assorted spots down to her adorned jewelery and her individual pose fits her personality. The values in the colouring is also nicely done but the colouring strokes could be a little smoother, especially with the highlights. Also, you could be a little more creative with her hairdo but I do like the colour and the length; I just feel it doesn't stand out as much as, say her anatomy.

And while there's nothing particularly ''wrong'' with the base colour chosen for the background, it's a bit dull compared to how vibrant the character is. It could contrast with the foreground by a level or two. It seems like it's just kind of ''there'' and should seem apart of the overall composition.

Overall, the character of Che is very fascinating and I'd love to see more of her whenever you can. Keep up the great work, dear! :thumbsup:

(I hope I got everything. If I missed anything that you're dying to know about, just let me know.)